I played your game and I have to say, you wrote a really good story. I personally know someone who experienced something similar and told me a lot, so I can add a few observations and/or ideas.
1. Lena: You captured her attitude very well. One thing I would add: if the MC becomes assertive, Lena (if she wants to return to the MC) should take the initiative more often. This means events should start with her phone call, a text message, or even a sudden visit to the apartment door. They shouldn't be initiated by the player (clicking on the phone). This way, she'll try to arouse emotions in the MC to get back together. And if the MC becomes submissive, she'll gain even more confidence.
2. Natalie: It's clear that she's had a breakdown with the MC from the very beginning, but she doesn't give in to her emotions, which means she has a strong system of values and respect. However, she quickly gives in to them as soon as it becomes clear to her that the MC is breaking up with Lena. And that should be highlighted. Such a person will quickly fall in love and push for a long-term relationship, even a family. You even made this clear when you mentioned children, supposedly jokingly. She also won't tolerate MC dating other women. She'll be jealous.
3. Clair: She's MC's sister, and they have a pretty good relationship. Why, all this time, have they never once discussed what happened?
4. Iris: An interesting character because she forces the player to be patient. She doesn't get handed anything on a silver platter, and that's a good thing.
5. Riley: She doesn't seem like wife material, and that's a good thing. She's the opposite of Natalie and introduces.
One more thing: I played through the game a second time, but this time I focused entirely on Lena. The MC became submissive. Surprisingly, Lena decided to come back to me. I wasn't expecting that ending.
Just played for the first time and i just wanted to come here and say you have a fantastic game brewing here! The writing and dialogue is great and I think it really allows the game to stand out and amplify the rest of the game. Also has the best AI animations i have seen in an AVN of the ntr genre so far.
Keep up the great work and I really think you have something special here!
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I played your game and I have to say, you wrote a really good story. I personally know someone who experienced something similar and told me a lot, so I can add a few observations and/or ideas.
1. Lena: You captured her attitude very well. One thing I would add: if the MC becomes assertive, Lena (if she wants to return to the MC) should take the initiative more often. This means events should start with her phone call, a text message, or even a sudden visit to the apartment door. They shouldn't be initiated by the player (clicking on the phone). This way, she'll try to arouse emotions in the MC to get back together. And if the MC becomes submissive, she'll gain even more confidence.
2. Natalie: It's clear that she's had a breakdown with the MC from the very beginning, but she doesn't give in to her emotions, which means she has a strong system of values and respect. However, she quickly gives in to them as soon as it becomes clear to her that the MC is breaking up with Lena. And that should be highlighted. Such a person will quickly fall in love and push for a long-term relationship, even a family. You even made this clear when you mentioned children, supposedly jokingly. She also won't tolerate MC dating other women. She'll be jealous.
3. Clair: She's MC's sister, and they have a pretty good relationship. Why, all this time, have they never once discussed what happened?
4. Iris: An interesting character because she forces the player to be patient. She doesn't get handed anything on a silver platter, and that's a good thing.
5. Riley: She doesn't seem like wife material, and that's a good thing. She's the opposite of Natalie and introduces.
One more thing: I played through the game a second time, but this time I focused entirely on Lena. The MC became submissive. Surprisingly, Lena decided to come back to me. I wasn't expecting that ending.
Nice game... but prefs menu doesn't work (missing pics)
Just played for the first time and i just wanted to come here and say you have a fantastic game brewing here! The writing and dialogue is great and I think it really allows the game to stand out and amplify the rest of the game. Also has the best AI animations i have seen in an AVN of the ntr genre so far.
Keep up the great work and I really think you have something special here!
I need Chinese
awesome game man
Thanks!! <3
Love the game so far, hope only the animation is AI, anyway nice to play and intro
Thanks!! <3